Thursday, February 7, 2013
JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 22
Felons should not be allowed to vote becuase they will vote for the wrong and will vote for what they did that made them to in jail. Also, they'll try to look for a RELEVANT reason to let what they did be something that will be allowed and will not be illegal. The SOURCE of knowledge that could be granted felons want might become a frustration to many parents or couples. Arguements will break out in crowds and may get out of hand due to COMPLEX problems the government is having while thinking if they should allow the wrong. That is way I think felons should not be allowed to vote.
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Carlos, it seems that you have some good ideas in this paragraph, but I became a little confused when reading some of the sentences. Remember to proofread your work. You did a good job of using all of the words.
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