Thursday, January 31, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports? Taking steroids is PRIMARILY cheating and is not allowed in the Olympics or other sports. Steroids could keep you energized for a PERIOD of time but could enhance some of your abilities. If you hear about people in the Olympics using steroids or any other drug while noticing it being okay, then maybe its a TRADITION to be able to use P.E.D.'s(Performance enhancing drugs)in the Olympics in their location, but not in California. Therefore, that is why I think P.E.D.'s, such as steroids should not be allowed in sports.

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  1. It seems like steroids has become an unspoken tradition in sports--the athletes and coaches know about it but fans do not. (Remember to proofread your paragraphs; you accidentally put a question mark at the end of the topic sentence.)

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